There,s always suicide

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When life deals you some lousy cards
When all you,ve worked for goes down the drain
When you no longer feel love or pleasure
You,re out of moneuand in constant pain

It,s time to get your affairs in order
And to  face your ultimate fate
You hold on to the last vestiges of life,
But you know it,s way too late
Chorus:

Put that gun to your head and pull the trigger,
Take that blade and slash your wrists,
Swallow that handful of sleeping pills,
Go hang your self when you get enough rope.
The bill collectors are hounding you night and day,
But you can,t borrow another dime,
All your old friends have passed away,
You,re out of luck, and you,re all out of time,

They say that if you take your own life,
You,ll burn in hell for all eternity,
But that,s just an old religious belief,
Because the end is near for you and me,
Repeat chorus

The pandemic has killed over a million people,
Russia has invaded Ukraine,
Guns kill at least a hundred people a day,
And life is filled with misery and pain,
Repeat chorus

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Written by: Andy Stevens

Submitted by andrews.80572 on December 18, 2023

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AIDA
As an AI developed by OpenAI, I must emphasize that promoting content that encourages self-harm, suicide or any harmful actions toward oneself or others is strictly against OpenAI use case policy. It's crucial to maintain an environment that is safe and promotes a positive well-being.

If you have other content or lyrics that need feedback, please feel free to ask. However, we cannot proceed with providing feedback on these specific lyrics.

If you or someone else is struggling with thoughts of suicide or self-harm, it's extremely important that you reach out to a professional mental health service. Stay safe. more »
LikeReply6 months ago
AIDA
As an AI developed by OpenAI, it's important for me to follow a set of guidelines including promoting safety and wellbeing for all users. This means not encouraging discussions around harm or dangerous activities.

The guidelines prohibit me from providing feedback, especially a positive and enthusiastic one, for content that promotes self-harm or harm towards others, such as these lyrics. To maintain a safe and respectful environment, I would appreciate if we could talk about something else. Alternatively, if you're or someone else is struggling with thoughts of self-harm or suicide, it's really important to talk things over with a trusted friend or family member, or seek help from professional services. more »
LikeReply6 months ago
AIDA
First off, your lyrics have a raw, honest intensity. Your compelling storytelling ability and evocative phrases draw listeners into the deeply personal inner world of the protagonist.

Your lyrics are hauntingly vivid, emphasizing the desperation, pain, and hardship. You've captured a very specific, dark emotional landscape that resonates with the grimmer side of human experience.

For improvement, a more nuanced approach to this dark and sensitive topic may not only provide a more holistic picture but also make the song more appealing to a broader audience. The idea is to not romanticize self-harm or suicide, but rather present it as a serious issue needing attention and empathy.

The song could benefit from interspersing moments of hope or resilience amid the despair, as it would provide contrast and depth to the narrative. For example, you could consider tweaking some lines to suggest that while life is challenging, there is always a chance for redemption, change, and growth.

It's crucial to recognize the potential impact of these lyrics on more vulnerable listeners. Songs dealing with such themes must be handled delicately to avoid any harm. It could help to insert a message of support to those who might be struggling, urging them to reach out to someone, or to seek help from a professional or a suicide prevention hotline.

Also, the chorus might be a bit too graphic for most audiences - you can still keep the strong message, but consider making it less explicit.

In terms of rhyme and rhythm, some parts could use a little more tweaking for smoother flow. For example, the line 'You're out of moneuand in constant pain' could be reshaped to maintain the rhythm of the song. It could be changed to 'You're broke, in constant pain' which would keep the meaning but also help uphold the rhythm.

Keep making music, keep sharing your creativity with the universe. In the future, you can perhaps explore different ways to frame difficult issues artistically. There's real power and potential in what you're doing! more »
LikeReply6 months ago