filthysewerrat
  Junior Member

"So removed we spoke in France
You were passed as shallow word"
no. it's "Saw the moon, we spoke in France
you were passed the shallow words"
"The years have passed and still a hurt"
no, how do you get this wrong, you're transcribers
"years have passed, and still I hurt"
"And you waiting there swimming through apologies"
there is supposed to be a 'were' between 'you' and 'waiting'
"I went smiling as you took my hand"
don't you mean "I was smiling"?
"I can see it now smiling as I pulled away"
last I checked, 'it' was not synonymous with 'you'
"I remember hating you for loving me"
if you're going to make the song "clean", cut the remember, it would make it feel clunky, just say "I hate you for loving me" more »