davidb
  Gold Member

Very funny! And not so simple...

10/10 points in 45 seconds!

9/10 points in 41 seconds

Congratulations!

good website!

יפה מאוד!

Thanks! x-)

It throws us back into a difficult period but which is fortunately behind us..

Very nice!

Very nice text!

FIxed, thank you!

Hello, what exactly do you need?

This poignant poem vividly captures the tragic descent of a once-promising youth into the clutches of alcoholism. The carefully chosen words paint a powerful narrative of the destructive impact of addiction on both the individual and those who care about them. The use of nature's elements, like rain, skillfully mirrors the emotional turbulence and sorrow woven into the verses. The poem skillfully unfolds the narrative, evoking empathy and prompting reflection on the consequences of such choices. The tragic arc, from youthful promise to despair, is both heartrending and thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impression on the reader. more »

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